yes, edit please
i join the others who have commented about this. Maybe "Less water clearly equals more efficient," but it does not equal better writing or editing. And that other phrase, "The technology being used by Coca-Cola treats water discharged through beverage" is a keeper for a writers' style manual on how to ensure that readers re-read a sentence at least twice. Having enjoyed this site for a long time, I have also enjoyed the never-ending stream of bloopers, about 26.4 gallons' worth of them by now. Maybe it's true that the quality of writing these days is inversely proportional to the use of hand-held technology and txt mssgs.
